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Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Other user's comments on INVASiiON.

Me:
" You don't have to be scared guys, comments are welcome. Think of this like Super Mercenary's inspiring story; WAR.
Only, I'm writing it and right now there isn't anyone dying."

Super Mercenary:
"Sweet! A compliment!"

Me:
"WAR is definitely deserving of it, I love reading it!"

Big B's Llama: (Yes, that's his name.)
" Ok good, I read this twice and wanted to comment, but thought you would get mad.

P.S.
Super Merc, definitely worth it!"

Me, quoting Big B's Llama:
"Don't worry! I love constructive criticism!"

Big B:
" Oh well in that case...

*pulls out 200 page essay on all the things that are wrong with Invasion

"I've been waiting for a looong time to break this puppy out..."

Me:
"
Break it out then! Throw everything that you've got at it!

I'm more ready than you would think..."

WinterWolf, who is not on Blogger:
"
Lol! nice, very funny.. But you would have twice as many if you read my book..."

Big B:
" It would take hours to write everything, but I'll just write this.
x|o|x
x|o|o
x|x|o


How the heck did that get in there?
So what, I procrastinated! :D

ps
Winter has book?
please give me details!"

Me:
" Um, Wintr haz abowt fordi fiv bookz."

WinterWolf, with some bad Grammar:
" Oh be quiet! Yes I have a book, Unfortunatly my dad redid the computer so its lost."

Big B:
" oh, that's not good! You didn't keep it anywhere on the e-net?"

WinterWolf:
" Nope, I joined lulu but I couldn't figure out how to transfer the book from microsoft word, So I didn't. -_- I think I might rewrite it though"

Big B:
" Oh, I feel bad! Well lets get back to Jango's story! Awesome!"

(This is from my forum, so my name there is "Jango-Jordan")

Super Mercenary:
"Very good Jango! I like it, but I like my story better. Why? It's because it's kind of hard to follow your story. Still, it is a very good story."

*After three huge posts

Super Mercenary:
" This is getting good. I might have a rival in the story thing."

Me:
" That's what I knew when you started WAR!"

Big B:
"lol, I vote that JJ's story wins! Even though it's kinda hard to follow... Is this all a dream? Because he went to bed in the present and woke up in this which is kind of confusing."

Super Mercenary:
"My thoughts exactly, except for the first part."

Big B:
" lol, never said that yours was bad!"

Me, with a spoiler:
" Okay, so in the first post, when he walked through the doorway:
WARNING: SPOILER:

He walks through the doorway and into the future. An unknown being calling itself "i i" transported him from 2021 to 2027."


Yes, I know that I keep renaming the being, but I've finally decided on "i i".

4 comments:

mariposa said...

Lol, interesting dialogue :)

& thanks a ton for the comments you've been leaving - I'm so glad you like my posts :)

Kyle Hendricks said...

I love reading you posts! It makes me think, and in more ways than one.

=D

mariposa said...

Thanks so much :D

Kyle Hendricks said...

=D
It's fun to comment!