Me:
" You don't have to be scared guys, comments are welcome. Think of this like Super Mercenary's inspiring story; WAR.
Only, I'm writing it and right now there isn't anyone dying."
Super Mercenary:
"Sweet! A compliment!"
Me:
"WAR is definitely deserving of it, I love reading it!"
Big B's Llama: (Yes, that's his name.)
" Ok good, I read this twice and wanted to comment, but thought you would get mad.
P.S.
Super Merc, definitely worth it!"
Me, quoting Big B's Llama:
"Don't worry! I love constructive criticism!"
Big B:
" Oh well in that case...
*pulls out 200 page essay on all the things that are wrong with Invasion
"I've been waiting for a looong time to break this puppy out..."
Me:
" Break it out then! Throw everything that you've got at it!
I'm more ready than you would think..."
WinterWolf, who is not on Blogger:
" Lol! nice, very funny.. But you would have twice as many if you read my book..."
Big B:
" It would take hours to write everything, but I'll just write this.
x|o|x
x|o|o
x|x|o
How the heck did that get in there?
So what, I procrastinated!
ps
Winter has book?
please give me details!"
Me:
" Um, Wintr haz abowt fordi fiv bookz."
WinterWolf, with some bad Grammar:
" Oh be quiet! Yes I have a book, Unfortunatly my dad redid the computer so its lost."
Big B:
" oh, that's not good! You didn't keep it anywhere on the e-net?"
WinterWolf:
" Nope, I joined lulu but I couldn't figure out how to transfer the book from microsoft word, So I didn't. I think I might rewrite it though"
Big B:
" Oh, I feel bad! Well lets get back to Jango's story! Awesome!"
(This is from my forum, so my name there is "Jango-Jordan")
Super Mercenary:
"Very good Jango! I like it, but I like my story better. Why? It's because it's kind of hard to follow your story. Still, it is a very good story."
*After three huge posts
Super Mercenary:
" This is getting good. I might have a rival in the story thing."
Me:
" That's what I knew when you started WAR!"
Big B:
"lol, I vote that JJ's story wins! Even though it's kinda hard to follow... Is this all a dream? Because he went to bed in the present and woke up in this which is kind of confusing."
Super Mercenary:
"My thoughts exactly, except for the first part."
Big B:
" lol, never said that yours was bad!"
Me, with a spoiler:
" Okay, so in the first post, when he walked through the doorway:
WARNING: SPOILER:
He walks through the doorway and into the future. An unknown being calling itself "i i" transported him from 2021 to 2027."
Yes, I know that I keep renaming the being, but I've finally decided on "i i".
Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Other user's comments on INVASiiON.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 1:20 PM 4 comments
Labels: Invasiion
Monday, September 29, 2008
Uh, Promo's?
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 3:49 PM 0 comments
Saturday, September 27, 2008
Huge revisions of Invasiion.
I've made a ton of modifications to Invasiion, such as Grammar updates, made most of the posts a paragraph or three longer, and gave more information about life before and Kyle's sister; Meagan. I'll upload them tomorrow, or maybe on monday.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 10:33 PM 0 comments
Friday, September 26, 2008
Invasion / Invasiion, Twilight / Twiliight
For major spoilers that I don't feel comfortable revealing, I've renamed Invasion to Invasiion. Two "I"s.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:51 PM 0 comments
SDLA Dance class.
OUICH!
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 7:45 AM 1 comments
Wednesday, September 24, 2008
Cool Quotes
I found these at www.quotationspage.com
It is by the goodness of God that in our country we have those three unspeakably precious things: freedom of speech, freedom of conscience, and the prudence never to practice either of them.
Mark Twain (1835 - 1910), Following the Equator (1897)
An ounce of action is worth a ton of theory.
Friedrich Engels (1820 - 1895)
Valour needs first strength, then a weapon.
J. R. R. Tolkien (1892 - 1973), Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring
We don't receive wisdom; we must discover it for ourselves after a journey that no one can take for us or spare us.
Marcel Proust (1871 - 1922)
I like quotes!
(Commenting is always welcome!)
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:07 PM 0 comments
Sunday, September 21, 2008
What is truly unconquerable?
IS anything? What is "Conquerable"?
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 8:02 PM 5 comments
Labels: How would you define, Miracle, Unconquerable
Friday, September 19, 2008
Wiki WIP.
I'm creating a Wiki for Invasion, and so it will also contain information about Twilight.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 5:21 PM 0 comments
Labels: Invasiion
Thursday, September 18, 2008
SDLA and BRSINGR
SDLA was awesome! but after wards, we went looking for Spore and couldn't find it.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 5:56 PM 2 comments
Labels: SDLA
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
Dragon's and Schoolwork.
Dragon's are awesome, they're majestic, usually powerfull, and can breathe fire! It'd be awesome to be a dragon, but unfortunatley, I'm Human.
Oh well....
School is hard, nad I'm talking about Public School. In the breif moments that I've been there, it was hard to endure all of the swearing, and some of the outfits that the girls were wearing were hideous! Most, if not all, wore tight pants. And a few looked like their shirts were going to fall off!
EW!
Self-Respect? Decency? Anyone!?
*Shakes head*
Anyway, onto different topics.
Today was Constitution day, so me and my brother went and recited the Declaration of Independance at a school called Legacy. It was fun, but I could only remember this much.
When in the course of human events, it becomes necissary for one people to dissolve the political bands which connect them to another, and to assume among the powers of the earth, the seperate and equel stations to which the laws of nature and of nature's God entitle them, A decent respect for the opinions of mankind require that they should declare the causes which impel them to the seperation. [1]
. . .
Prudence indeed, dictates that governments long established should not be changed for light and transient causes.[2]
[1] You should say what you're doing before you do it, unless you're going for a surprise.
[2] Prudence dictates the governments that have been around for a while shouldn't be changed for something small and dumb, like say, aomeone ran over your toe and you wanted to get revenge on them, it'd be a "Light and transient" cause for you to write up a bill, telling the amry to single out that guy and kill him. It goes along with the saying and counter-saying: "An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth." "Why, if we followed that, we'd all be blind and toothless!"
Anyway, I have to read 4/5ths pf the book "The seven habits of highly effective teens" by tommorrow at 7:30 in the morning, so I'd better get to it!
(Comments are welcome. Mariposa, don't copyright that!)
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 10:12 PM 2 comments
Questions regarding things of some interest...
QUESTIONS:
Prudence, indeed, dictates that governments long established should not be changed for light and transient causes.
QUESTION “Well, what is a light and transient cause?”
Freedom of speech, how many people actually use it?
What is a tyrant?
What is the definition of Evil?
*And which came first, the chicken, or the egg?
*No clue. =P
(Comments are welcome.)
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 10:10 AM 1 comments
Sunday, September 14, 2008
Book Review #1/ A RolePlay.
Occasionaly I will do Book reviews, in this case, yes I'm a guy, yes I know this is a book intended for girls, no, I'm not Emo or Goth or whatever, but the first one is : Princess Academy.
Why in the world did I read it? I was desparate for something to read, saw this, picked it up and started reading. It was actually pretty good! It was kind of refreshing to get away from the violence that I've been reading for the last few years. I'd give it 4.5 out of 5. It was cool, but in some places it seemed like there wasn't quite enough detail, and I wished that it'd been longer.
I've always liked chatting online with other people around the globe, so I established a forum on InvisionFree called Brick_Cave. It was fun, but due to a number of things, I couldn't be on, and there wasn't enough members for the forum to grow very much, so I re-made it on ZetaBoards and re-named it Brick Cave2. You can find the address below.
s1.ZetaBoards.com/BrickCave2/index/
If you like RolePlaying or LEGO or BrickArms, or just want to chat, please sign up!
Twilight
I have no IDEA what the storyline is, except what I've written so far. I just started typing in Microsoft Word and that's how I got the entire first post! After that, I've added on, but I don't really know what the storyline is BESIDES this:
CAUTION: THIS NEXT PART CONTAINS MAJOR SPOILERS:
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Jake is Kyle's long lost twin brother, Kara is a clone of Alyx, Gabe is actually a king, and the "King" that outlawed Technology; is actually a genetically altered Boron in disguise. Twilight is actually a being that, every three days, forms a bond with certain objects at random locations. The first day, when Jake, Gabe and Kara were still in the Mayor's house, the being called Twilight formed a bond with them. Every three days after that, they get transported into the Invasion timeline. At the beginning of Invasion, Kyle sees a strange light in the next door neighbors house. That is Kara, Jake and Gabe transporting into Todd Johnson's house. A few lines later, when Kyle is in the future, he sees the same light. This is when a new character called Ven is killed and Jake, Kara and Gabe are transported back. Far later, Kara and Alyx switch timelines, much to Jake's and Kyle's confusion. Kara and Alyx both have Red hair and Green eyes, something that I was obsessed with when I was younger. (Invasion was originally called "Electron" and was about a bunch of teenagers that are attacked by a misterious figure. The main stars name in that was Even Eleck. I wanted to associate him with Electricity as much as possible. The story itself often contridicted itself, and there was an unfortunate lack of Grammar.) Alyx helps them get to the King and kill him. Kara accidentaly detonates a nuclear bomb, set for a half an hour. The case around the bomb is virtually indestructable, so Kyle grabs her, runs to a hovercraft and goes straight into the atmosphere. The book switches to Alyx, and the last line should be something about "Evil is never truly beaten, it just fades, away, patientely waiting for the next time to gather and strike."
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END OF SPOILERS
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:08 PM 2 comments
Labels: Invasiion, Twilight Spoilers Invasion Book Review #1
Saturday, September 13, 2008
Support our troops!
I got this in an E-Mail, but I'm going to post it anyway.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 10:29 PM 2 comments
Gasp! Deep thoughts!?
"To be, or not to be, that is the question. Wether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, or to take up arms against a sea of trouble, and by opposing end them!? To die, for in this sleep of death, what dreams may come, when we have shuffled off this mortal coil, must give us pause."
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 2:15 PM 2 comments
Friday, September 12, 2008
Ice Skating
Ouch! I fell on my elbow and bruised it. It's fun, and all of my friends were there, but it was COLD!
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:44 PM 0 comments
Invasion. . .
I'm thinking of making it into a full-fledged book. I already have at least a paragraph of nine chapters.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 1:53 PM 0 comments
Labels: Invasiion
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Martin Luther....
Ugh, studying him is HARD! Oh well....
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 2:26 PM 0 comments
Sunday, September 7, 2008
Giant_WIP 1.5
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:26 PM 0 comments
Saturday, September 6, 2008
A creepy dream.
Okay, I had a creepy dream that involved a kidnapping that was more like a scavenger hunt. It also involved going to college, though I can't remember how.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 11:08 AM 2 comments
Tuesday, September 2, 2008
Internet Browsers.
FireFox
Followers and BTS.
I'm exited for the new Gadget coming out called Followers, and speaking of followers, who actually reads this blog? Next time you read, leave a comment!
BTS
Back To School this thursday, you might think that HomeSchoolers go learn at home, right? We do, but some of us organize schools. I go to SDLA, South Davis Liber Academy, Organized on LEMI, that was created by Analadee Milne.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 11:33 AM 0 comments
Monday, September 1, 2008
SPORE
I WANT IT!!!
My brother get's paid a lot for some reason, so he's (Hopefully) going to buy it for my sister and I.
(He'll get to use it too. =) )
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 9:23 PM 0 comments
Windows Media Player 11
I upgraded, and WOW, it's sleek and shiny. Microsoft may not make the best software, but they know how to make a great skin!
I'm sorry that my blog posts are so short, but not a ton happens in my life that I won't have to do a huge four-page explanation for.
Posted by Kyle Hendricks at 8:29 AM 0 comments