" You don't have to be scared guys, comments are welcome. Think of this like Super Mercenary's inspiring story; WAR.
Only, I'm writing it and right now there isn't anyone dying."
"Sweet! A compliment!"
"WAR is definitely deserving of it, I love reading it!"
Big B's Llama: (Yes, that's his name.)
" Ok good, I read this twice and wanted to comment, but thought you would get mad.
Super Merc, definitely worth it!"
Me, quoting Big B's Llama:
"Don't worry! I love constructive criticism!"
" Oh well in that case...
*pulls out 200 page essay on all the things that are wrong with Invasion
"I've been waiting for a looong time to break this puppy out..."
" Break it out then! Throw everything that you've got at it!
I'm more ready than you would think..."
WinterWolf, who is not on Blogger:
" Lol! nice, very funny.. But you would have twice as many if you read my book..."
" It would take hours to write everything, but I'll just write this.
How the heck did that get in there?
So what, I procrastinated!
Winter has book?
please give me details!"
" Um, Wintr haz abowt fordi fiv bookz."
WinterWolf, with some bad Grammar:
" Oh be quiet! Yes I have a book, Unfortunatly my dad redid the computer so its lost."
" oh, that's not good! You didn't keep it anywhere on the e-net?"
" Nope, I joined lulu but I couldn't figure out how to transfer the book from microsoft word, So I didn't. I think I might rewrite it though"
" Oh, I feel bad! Well lets get back to Jango's story! Awesome!"
(This is from my forum, so my name there is "Jango-Jordan")
"Very good Jango! I like it, but I like my story better. Why? It's because it's kind of hard to follow your story. Still, it is a very good story."
*After three huge posts
" This is getting good. I might have a rival in the story thing."
" That's what I knew when you started WAR!"
"lol, I vote that JJ's story wins! Even though it's kinda hard to follow... Is this all a dream? Because he went to bed in the present and woke up in this which is kind of confusing."
"My thoughts exactly, except for the first part."
" lol, never said that yours was bad!"
Me, with a spoiler:
" Okay, so in the first post, when he walked through the doorway:
Tuesday, September 30, 2008